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This lonely path I can see
Far, far ahead of me

The battles I've faced,
The the dreams that I've chased,

Have all led up to this final moment

Though something inside me,
Tells me these words;

"The light of day
Shall show you the way"

Shall I stay in the darkness?
What shall I do?

For the light, you see
Is inside you
Oh god... My first attempt at poetry... Somebody, quick! Kill it with fire! :iconkillitwithfireplz:

I got interested in poetry because if my College Prep teacher... But this is ridiculous...

EDIT- I also forgot to say (but if you read my signature you'd probably know this), I was also inspired by Korean poet; Ch'On Sang-Pyong. :iconyaykoreaplz:
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KagamineKris Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
ISH SHO PWETTY~
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silvermoonmanga Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you!!! ;D
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:iconkagaminekris:
KagamineKris Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
WELCOME~
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Yamisamurai24 Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2012  Student
:clap: Not bad!
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silvermoonmanga Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Th-thank you! To tell the truth... I think I got inspiration from Hopeless.. I mean... I was reading her "poetry" and thought-

'My god... I can even write better poems than this chick'

And so... This thing was born. :iconyayitalyplz:
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Yamisamurai24 Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2012  Student
Poetry from Hopeless? But her poetry sucks anyways
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silvermoonmanga Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Yes, and that's why it inspired me. Because, I was so sure even I (who hasn't written real poetry in years), could write better than this chick, and I was right! :D
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Yamisamurai24 Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2012  Student
Yeah!
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silvermoonmanga Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
:iconyayspainplz:
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Yamisamurai24 Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2012  Student
:iconpervyedgeplz:
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